Crossing lines…
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In a small town just outside Belfast at the height of the Troubles, Cushla teaches primary school children by day and helps out in her brother’s pub by night. As a Catholic family amid a Protestant majority, Cushla’s family have learned to keep a neutral profile, tolerating the soldiers who come into the bar blustering and bullying in their youthful arrogance. But when Cushla meets Michael Agnew, she finds herself crossing social and cultural lines, and that can be dangerous in a society divided by fear and hate…
Kennedy does a great job of evoking her setting, showing the dividing lines, the “occupying” or “peace-keeping” army depending on perspective, the poverty and the fear. The love affair between Cushla and Michael is also completely credible – this young woman who falls for an older, married man. Her writing is excellent – descriptive without being “creative” or overly flowery, and she avoids the mawkishness that often comes with stories set in such tragic times. Her characters manage to live their lives almost normally for the most part, even finding some fun along the way. But she also shows how easy it is for people, especially boys and young men, to get caught up in extremism, and how their acts ripple out to destroy their families and wider communities. And Cushla’s transgression, minor though it would be considered in a time of peace and in a modern society, hits against the excessive moral outrage of a society that uses religion as its excuse for its violence.
Lots to love, therefore, in this one, and I quite see why so many people have indeed loved it. For my taste, however, the love affair got far more attention than it should have, and the politics were relegated too far into the background. While very credibly done, to me the love affair was banal and uninteresting. Young woman falls for much older married man and, surprise, surprise, discovers she’s not his first adulterous relationship. I didn’t find Michael particularly charismatic – Kennedy has her characters mention that he’s gorgeous several times, possibly in an attempt to justify why this attractive and independent-minded young woman should turn herself into his sex toy, but I didn’t feel that would have been enough to dazzle the Cushla we get to know. Sure, Michael talks to her about books and art occasionally, but mostly they meet, have hurried and often sordid sex, and then part. Of course it happens in real life, which is why I say it’s credible. But is it interesting? Not to me, sadly.

The politics are ever present, and do play a part in the story eventually. But for the most part, we don’t really get involved. I wondered why Kennedy set it outside Belfast where the Troubles were a little more distanced, rather than in the city itself. And I felt that it would have been a more interesting plot if either Cushla or Michael had been more actively partisan. Michael is slightly connected to the political world, in that he’s a barrister defending young men accused of involvement in the violence, but this aspect is referred to rather than shown. We don’t see him in action or meet his clients or their victims. Cushla and her family are more interested in staying out of trouble than winning, and I suspect that is probably always true of most people caught up in civil conflicts. So again I couldn’t fault the credibility, but it left the story feeling monotone – until close to the end nothing much happens apart from the affair, and even the events at the end seemed rather muted in terms of the tragedies that we know happened daily in Northern Ireland at that time. Kennedy has a habit of skipping things as they happen, and then telling them in retrospect; for example, she will start a chapter by making reference to something that has happened since the last chapter that the reader wasn’t present for. I found that prevented the emotional involvement that I was longing to feel. It may be voyeuristic, but reading about an event as if it is happening now is always more involving than being told about it as something that is already over.
Far too much criticism for a book that I enjoyed overall. I think the reason I’m being so hard on it is that I felt it was so close to being wonderful, and yet just missed. Had the love affair been more passionate, the drama more dramatic or the tragedy more tragic, then the story would have matched the excellence of the setting and characterisation. As it is, it left me admiring but largely unmoved.
Sorry that this one didn’t quite hit the spot for you. I did read that Kennedy grew up in a small town in County Down where the book’s set. Perhaps there’s a personal element to it for her
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It so nearly worked for me, but I always prefer the political to the personal so the balance was tipped against me. I though her writing was great, though. Ah, that makes sense – and it’s a bit unfair of me to demand that she write the book I want to read rather than the one she wanted to write… 😉
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The setting and context for this one sound fascinating, FictionFan. And so does the idea that these two people might get involved. I know what you mean, though, about the love affair being the main focus of the story. Personally, that’s not as much my thing, although I’ve read some that were excellent. I’m glad you mostly liked this one, though!
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I always prefer the political to the personal so the balance was just tipped the wrong way for me, and somehow the love affair felt to ordinary to really be interesting. But her setting and characterisation were great – a near miss!
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I’m glad this was enjoyable despite the flaws, though I’d wish too that the politics were more prominent than the romance.
Incidentally, when I clicked on your review, I was sure I’d read Louise Penny in the title and kept waiting for the body to come up… 😛
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I’m always more interested in the politics than the personal, so the balance just tipped in the wrong way for me, but her setting and characterisation were great – a near miss! Haha, I often get confused by authors with similar names! The Belfast setting must have seemed odd too… 😉
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The setting and politics sound more interesting than the relationship at the forefront. At least you found some enjoyment in this.
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Yes, somehow the affair didn’t come to life – it seemed so normal and kinda sordid. But the setting and characterisation were great – the balance was just tipped a little against my preferences. A near miss!
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Interesting comments FF, this one is on my list and I might move it further up now!
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I’m glad my ambivalent review hasn’t discouraged you! The writing is great and there’s so much in it to love – just not quite to my taste. Hope you enjoy it when you get to it!
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I didn’t know this was “Reading Ireland Month”! Is it a personal challenge or one you’re just taking part in? I like the banner. 🙂
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No, it’s one that Cathy at 746 Books runs every March, she being Irish herself and kind of involved in the arts scene over there. Every year I plan to read something for it, but most years I end up missing the deadline!
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I was going to read Trespasses this month, I will soon. I’m sorry this didn’t quite work for you.
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It’s well worth reading, Ali – the setting and characterisation are great, as is the writing. I always prefer the political to the personal, so the balance was just a little off for me, but I understand why so many people are loving it. Hope it works for you when you get to it!
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Those that just miss can be the most disappointing of all when they come so close, but I can see how the looking back at something instead of experiencing it along with the character would be distancing. At least you enjoyed it overall!
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Yes, it’s frustrating when everything individually is good but somehow the whole thing just isn’t grabbing the emotions in the way that you hope. And I’m really not an enthusiast for events happening in the gaps between chapters! However, the setting and the characterisation are great – I can quite see why so many people are loving this one.
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Isn’t it disappointing when the credible isn’t interesting? Young woman-older man. A story as old as time. I think that if you’re going to use an old trope, you need to find a way to pull it out of its rut.
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Yes, I kept hoping that there was going to be some kind of original twist or development to the love affair, but it followed the anticipated line all the way through. Sometimes there can be too much realism…
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It’s really interesting to read your review with its reservations having read so many glowing reviews. Generally I prefer the personal to the political but as Jilanne says, with such an old trope you do want something different. I’ll look forward to reading this and seeing how I find it.
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I do see why so many people are loving it – it’s only my own preference for the political over the personal that got in the way. On the whole, contemporary fiction concentrates too much on the personal, or the individual, for my taste, which is a large part of why I don’t get on with it very well! I hope when you come to read this one it works better for you! 😀
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Your review has piqued my interest – I knew it was a “buzzy” book but didn’t know much about it. Good to know the potential flaws ahead of time. Could be one I read for Reading Ireland Month next year.
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It’s certainly a good fit for Reading Ireland – she does the setting very well, and the period of the Troubles is very interesting. And most people seem to like the emphasis being on the personal, so I’m glad my review hasn’t put you off! 😀
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I enjoyed this one but if I’m honest, I much preferred her short story collection. Thanks for taking part!
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I loved her writing, but am never truly enamoured with a love affair as the central story – unless the hero is Darcy, of course! 😉
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I’m waiting on this one from the library so I’m glad to hear you mostly liked it!
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I think you’ll enjoy the writing and characterisation, and plenty of people are enjoying the central story of the love affair more than I did. Fingers crossed it works for you! 😀
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Interesting to read your thoughts after so many glowing reviews! I think I would also prefer the political over the personal – few stories with romances at the centre really work for me, and like you say young woman/older man, while perfectly plausible, isn’t that interesting on its own…
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Yes, I rarely find a love affair a strong enough plot to really hold my attention – unless the hero is Darcy, of course! 😉 And I found this one didn’t seem to have much passion in it. But her writing is excellent, and the characterisation and setting alone make it well worth reading, even if it wasn’t quite what I was hoping for.
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Hmm that’s an odd way of writing for an author – mentioning major events that happened between chapters that the reader wasn’t privvy to. Seems like they are skipping over the best parts, no? I can see why you would feel a bit removed from it all with that in mind…I know what you mean though, lots of authors do it, but it is annoying.
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I always wonder why authors do it. I found myself with this one sometimes wondering if I’d missed a bit and going back to check. A lot of the stuff that I’d have found more interesting than the sex happened off the page.
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I am on the fence about this book, and I am still there after reading your review. It could be interesting. I know so little about the Troubles. At least the book isn’t too long, if I decide to give it a try someday.
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Certainly lots of people have been far more enthusiastic about it than I was, although I did enjoy it overall. In retrospect I’m not sure how much it tells us about the Troubles – I feel as if she relied on the reader knowing the background.
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